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Yael Gelardin's avatar

Lovely homage to a dad.

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

Thank you, Yael.

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Bonita Mugnani's avatar

Touched by your love story. Thank You for this intimate heartbeating poem.

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

You have such a kind heart, Bonita! Thank you for your response.

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Linda Brown's avatar

So poignant, written with all the love possible to explain a joyous memory among others that were perhaps more harsh... a young daughter's love for her father endures....

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Oh yes. "The one who must be obeyed" who had " lines not to be crossed"! Dad! Yet, the joy found in those brief moments of feeling "so loved and so special". Dad! A complicated and complex relationship. Your love for him shines through this lovely piece, Sharon.

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

Yes, complex and complicated, but loved. Thank you, Sharron!

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Shirley's avatar

M’heart‼️

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Carol Roe's avatar

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

Thank you, Carol!

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

Thank you, Linda, for your insightful and kind words. I’m so glad you are here!

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