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Linda Brown's avatar

So special, so well written, Sharon. It really gave us a sense of your "space" as you grew up there.

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

Thank you, Linda! It was the place I could get to know myself, quiet, away from the chaos of a busy household.

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Yael Gelardin's avatar

Lovely poem , Sharon. I could identify with and reflect! Thank you.

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

Thank you, Yael! I’m glad it gave you a time to remember. Our young lives were perpetually changing…a lot to reflect on.

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Shirley's avatar

Love the story of your "safe place" as you grew up. Love and hugs to you and your "boyfriend"!!

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

Thanks, Shirley! We all need a place to bloom. I will hug my “boyfriend!!” Back atcha’!! 🤟

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sonnie petersen's avatar

So touching . One of my favorites Sharon

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

Thanks, Sonnie! You saw each of those stages come to life, over the years. 🦋

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Aw, so sweet. The dim, safe cave of that boxed in bed never changed, but it allowed YOU to change within it. I never had the surrounding arms of a lower bunk, but you helped me remember all those phases of my own young self, Sharon. Thanks for calling it all to my mind. Beautifully recounted, my friend.

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

Thank you, Sharron! All those stages..pieces of our growth, strung together like pearls. Each one a precious memory.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

All us old gals have a string of memory pearls. I know I do.

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Jill CampbellMason's avatar

So easy to feel a part of your growing up in the cozy place where you nurtured yourself...and i can certainly relate to having a place to yourself to allow yourself ( although we didn't know those words to begin with, just knew how wonderful it felt to have a space where no one could interrupt your imagination, your reading, your SELF) I love it!

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

Thank you, Jill! I am so pleased this is a piece that you can relate to. The space to nurture ourselves is as important to our growth, as food and water.

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Sue H's avatar

Love, love, love this my beautiful baby sister! My memories are always intertwined with yours, but I don’t have your talent for writing! I’m going to cherish this one! 💞

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

Thank you so much, Sue! Yes, we shared so much, and of course, you remember our girls’ room. 💕

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Richbee's avatar

Bunk bed fortification a castle at the beginning of memory lane . Yes, remember mine with a ladder to climb aloft and some days fell from the sky to choose bottoms bunk, safety first.

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Sharon Hudson's avatar

You got the top bunk, to be King of your world, Richard! But alas! The King had a fall! I was not allowed in the Castle, because I fell from the ladder. Hurt my pride.

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Richbee's avatar

Hubris has a way of saying that too much is not good and tends to knock the wind out of you.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Sad. But true, Richard.

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Richbee's avatar

And when that happens a few pats on the back will make you breathe free again.

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